Peer-Critique

1. Who were the sources?
Binnie Duval and Michele Bivona
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
This story talks about how Binnie changed the life's of many children and how she conquered her teaching career. Binnie sounds like a very nice woman and she has lots of family who love her.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
23
4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
1153
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
15
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
2
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
this sometimes led to discrimination, and children being raised different.
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
beginning.
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes.
10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
Her other children
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
Yes.
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
How did Binnie's mom inspire her?
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
Retired Teacher Personal Experience
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
It was an amazing story that i think personally should be heard. some of us have big ideas on what we want to do with our life's, but she took her teaching career seriously and she made a story out of it.
15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100

80